Comparison
Stanza 1:
I come to church for the candy
Yo peppermints is the truth
I'm pessimistic on Mondays if I had tweaked and missed you.
You look so good with the hat on
Hadta match with the shoes
Got you covered in satin
I came and sat in ya pew.
I come to Christmas fa dinner
Fifty rolls on my plate
Hella holes in my stockings
Holdin ya pockets in place.
I like my love with a budget
I like my hugs with a scent.
You smell like light gas water electricity rent.
Looking like why the gospel choir got so tired.
Daily basis so I gotta face it had to try it.
You my dream team dream catcher team captain
Matta fact I ain't seen you in a minute
Gotta take my butt to church.!!!
Stanza 2
Don't come to church for the gospel
I go to church just for you.
I'on see you fa the week
Then I'on know what to do.
Hate to ask you for money
Hide the fact that I ain't got no mo shoes.
Cos every time I see you I'm feeling richer than jews
Like it don't matter what i got
I got you by my side
The devil demons can't come get me
When I got angels ta ride.
It's never no need
When i got you here to help
It ain't no heat in the house
And I can't get it myself
You make sure the lights they stay on
And the fridge it got stuff
Can come to ya house to sleep and eat
You always give me enough.
I go hungry so you can get ya toes done.
I wanna thank you for the blessings and that Christianly love.
It's been a minute since I seen you
Lemme take my butt to church.!!
Read both an let me know which you prefer. Give me reasons why you chose which one you did. This is actually a song not a poem.!!!! Comment comment comment.!!