Challenge
Do the double tanka with me! Two stanzas, five lines each, 5-7-5-7-7 syllable form each stanza (see my "Bonkers" for something of an example). Tag me, if you please! #doubletanka
In Control
I cannot admit
That I am often overtaken
That the sea loves me
And that I can not love it
For it killed my hopefulness.
The sea rides my back
So that I cannot escape
Yet I struggle through
And overtime I pull it off
To be taken over once more.