Challenge
///// Nightdwellers 'Beginning Line' Challenge (May) /////
Write a piece of literature with the beginning line ‘Lost in the dark, tangled in silken threads’ Tag it #nightdwellers #beginningline.
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Just for inspiration, shits and giggles that kind of thing too... ;)
The Beaten Minute
Lost in the dark, tangled in silken threads,
breathe, sigh, swallow; pink in the cheeks,
again and again blank pages read,
ripened spring bud and mounted winter peaks.
Final moments close behind maroon sheets,
breathe, sigh, swallow; black eclipses eye,
heart springs wildly with interconnecting beats,
for a moment it is only fair to die.
White waters comb through unrelenting black,
breathe, sigh, swallow; green follows rain,
white linens over planks, bruises strung along the back,
purpose eats the passion fast, and all that's left is pain.
For a moment he's all mine; he belongs to me,
breathe, sigh swallow, and I'm his,
but the minute's with time flee'd,
and it's back against the rhyme: complaints, critique, analysis.
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