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Drabble me this. 100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely.
100 words of fiction. Not 99, not 101, not 847. One hundred words precisely. On choosing the winner, I couldn't care less about popularity and likes. I care about the storytelling. With a good side dish of solid grammar and following the rules of sticking to a hundred words.
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nitpick_nell in Flash Fiction

Averin

Smoke. Crackle of exposed wires. Scattered like broken toys bodies. Blood on the walls; on the floor.

A man in medical attire crawls backward, eyes riveted on a shadow… following him… slowly approaching – skinny blonde teen, shoulder length dreads hanging in front of her face, green eyes trail her pray. She was in no hurry. All others were dead. Would hurt no one now, would laugh about it never, ever, ever…

No help comes. None would for Doctor either.

“Please, please!” Doctor begs. Pitiful.

Pity. She has none. He killed it. “I pleaded too. You ignored. I ignore too…”