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Editing can be a pain

Doing some editing with my "editor" (my dad).

"Had been, is passive, just so you."

"I know."

"You can just drop it, the sentence still works."

"But where is the flair?"

"But it is passive."

"You are not allow to say that any more."

"It is still passive."

"I know."