If you don’t mind.

I have a story that I'm writing on an app called , Wattpad, and if anybody would please give it a chance and leaver whatever thoughts on it I'd be great.

Please Follow WILLBEKING, story is called KING

Synopsis:

As a kid DeLuca would witness his father commit terrible crimes. And as an adult hed commit them himself.

DeLuca has always been a beacon of bad luck. Moments after he was born his mother was shot dead and since then everything has gone wrong. He just so desperately wants something, anything to go his way. And when his father comes up to him one day asking if he wants to leave this hell and start anew somewhere else. It's like he's dreaming.

But there is one more job to do, the last one.

As the stakes rise and death seems like a likely outcome DeLuca keeps going with the dream of a peaceful life waiting for him.

Will DeLuca finish the job and live peacefully, or will he be doomed to stay in despair?