A Soul, Cracked.
I sat, looking around me with blank, empty eyes. My mind a jamble of wires, all electrocuting me, frying my head. But i could feel a stillness inside me. Not that of an unmoving petal on a sunny day but the stillness of a body that ceased to function, a corpse if you will. It was eating at my core, at my edges, and my cries of agony were so muffled that even I struggled to hear them. I got up. Maybe I stumbled, I'm not quite sure. I think I didn't mind that either.
(this is still unfinished but i'd like to hear some opinions)
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