Challenge
Challenge of the Week LXXVIII
The element of surprise. Write a story or poem with a surprising ending.
Well, Hello!
Bang, crash, boom, squeal!
Hello?
Silence replies.
Shatter, crash, boom, bang!
You ok?
Still nothing.
Grunt, bump, smash, boom!
HELLO??????????????????????
White feathers fall down.
(That better not have been my favorite pillow.)
BANG, BOOM, CRASH, SHRIEK, CRACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A figure falls through the floor.
*Grunts and groans*
I walk over.
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Well, it looks like my angel arrived.
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