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Unrequited
Write a poem of unrequited feelings, when one party feels something, but cannot be returned by the other. Winner will be chosen by most likes.
Since The Third Grade
We sat across from each other
every day at school,
but we never said hello.
Oh, I wanted to,
but you were popular.
I, just another boy in school.
In college,
in a chemistry class,
but you never looked my way,
and the chemistry
again failed.
Years breezed by,
we were neighbors.
I watched your children grow,
yet not a word passed between us.
Oh, I wanted to,
but being married,
and I single;
didn’t feel right.
More years wilted away;
now I can finally talk to you.
Can finally say,
I have loved you since third grade.
In this quiet moment,
just the two of us,
oh, it feels sad.
Rising from the ground,
I whisper goodbye.
Now, you are with angels.
8/21/2018
2:36 a.m. - 2:41 a.m.
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Danceinsilence
@bird57 ... great challenge 8=)

Danceinsilence
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weather_green
@Danceinsilence This is sad and beautiful! You have an amazing gift of portraying emotions so beautifully...

Danceinsilence
@Love2Write ... thank you for the like ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
Thanks for the like @Raiva ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@Mnezz ... appreciate the L & R ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@weather_green ... some things come to me and when I write for however long or short a time, I get caught up in the emotions as if being there ... glad you liked this ... 8=)

Clarity
@Danceinsilence my heart broke when I read the last line. so sad but a wonderful take on the challenge!

Danceinsilence
@Famewriter ... piece it back together and think of it as a bitter-sweet memory and thanks for your words ... like/repost ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
Appreciate the like/repost @Mansonmarie178 ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@LEHertel ... thank ye kindly for the like ... 8=)

Mansonmarie178
@Danceinsilence You’re welcome

Mnezz
@Danceinsilence De rien. =)

Danceinsilence
@Mnezz ...
Avec toi ... toujours de toutes les manières ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@BonnieBoo ... thank ye for the like ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
Thanks ye kindly for the like @Undermeyou ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
Appreciate the like @GlassDragonfly ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@Soul_Rebel ... good to see you and thanks for the like ... 8=)

Danceinsilence
@Chad1983 ... thanks for the like 8=)

Chad1983
@Danceinsilence My favorite part of this was the second stanza. I love the play on the word chemistry.

Danceinsilence
Thanks again @Chad1983 ... and that part was intentional 8=)

chainedinshadow
Aww, so sad!

Danceinsilence
@chainedinshadow ... perhaps but there is still a twinge of a memory to hold onto .. and thanks for the like/repost ... 8=)

bird57
@Danceinsilence this was so cute and heartbreaking ah! I loved it and wanted to cry!

Danceinsilence
@bird57 ... I have a lot of kleenex if you need them 8=)