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Sacrifice

Like raindrops in my eyes

and the fire

in your hair

is the tornado of your love

all here and there

let me know you are here to stay

this time

before you ask me to sacrifice

another day of my life.

#broken#love#life#sacrifice

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Nice poem! The word your on line 6 should be you’re though I think

Ok thank u @ghost_herald I always appreciate a little editing help :)

@demcmurphy oh, what a contrast love can have~ to want to avoid experiencing loss, true. I hope it ends smoothly & the person decides to stay! <3

Trust issues? Isn't there always a fine line between protecting your heart and loving freely?