f o o l i s h
how foolish
of me to think that our
fiery romance would
remain aflame our entire lives
how naive
of me to hope to be
your life-long lover
lips only kissing one another
how senseless
of me to dream of you
while you were dreaming of
her & her touch
her & her body
her & her flame
how foolish
of me to yearn for you
still
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estelle_moss
@Yuki

SomebodyNobody
@k_s I really felt that. I love the way you wrote this with the words falling as naturally as rain falls. I'm sorry that you're feeling this though. I hope it gets better and remember don't take it personally. It's not your fault.

estelle_moss
@SomebodyNobody thank you so much! this may be a bit awkward, but that didn't happen to me. the piece came from a land of fiction, as i've thankfully never had someone be unfaithful to me. but the heartbreak and betrayal is so real for so many people, so thank you for your kind words. :)

SomebodyNobody
@k_s props to you the way you conveyed it made it seem so personal I applaud you.

estelle_moss
@SomebodyNobody that's so kind! thank you!! <3 <3