Challenge
Write about the moment just before a blackout.
She scrambled for strength, her weakness had turned into helplessness, her hands held as if in prayer...
It was not until she was lying over tiles, pulling down the curtain like that infamous still in Psycho. But the close-up on her open eyes unlike Janet Leigh's would have revealed life.
Now she scrambled up again, onto her wet feet and back into the shower to wash the dried soap off of her.
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