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For the New and Young people who have recently (6 months or less) joined-Prose. FYI: I check every single entry for length of time. I only allow Under 6 months as a member. One year if you are young and it is stated on your profile. Do not worry about 'likes' this challenge is monarchy. Thank you, Benz
It warms my heart when I see young people who have recently joined our amazing writing group- Prose. It restores my faith in poetry, knowing it will live on. Think of this as an english class and I am the teacher. Please share with me your 'own' poem, that has never before been in any challege or published here on the prose. It can be about anything. Poetry only (I prefer verse, with an awareness for simple grammar) although it is not mandatory. I will read each piece thoroughly. Please tag me after you have entered. Please be patient if I do not review the same day you enter. I want to give every write the attention it deserves. *Everyone will receive a review. I am not a writing expert, reviews are based on my own experience of reading and writing poetry for many decades and what I have learned from my editors. *These reviews are my opinion. Thank you and have fun! -Benz
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Trunk

The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They it make it seems as though they’ll always be

It calmness perpetuating this fallacy

It acts as though it doesn’t know what’s coming next

Maybe because it doesn’t

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Standing in the same place it did yesterday and ten years before that.

Same place for a long time?

Not stagnation if you look in the wrong direction

Don’t look around

Look up

It’s a paradigm of continuity

Taller than it was two months ago and two decades before that

growing it did

Until it was “grown” (you’re always growing)

Taking on a new purpose as it did,

It now shades the people it sat under as a seed

This is a tree

This is change

The branches rest peacefully occasionally rocking at the visitation of a gentle breeze.

They act as they’ve been

Endurant

Its calmness perpetuating this characteristic

It acts

But to reflect that it’s a paradigm of promotion

From nothing to something