Challenge
For the New and Young people who have recently (6 months or less) joined-Prose.
FYI: I check every single entry for length of time. I only allow Under 6 months as a member.
One year if you are young and it is stated on your profile.
Do not worry about 'likes' this challenge is monarchy.
Thank you,
Benz
It warms my heart when I see young people who have recently joined our amazing writing group- Prose. It restores my faith in poetry, knowing it will live on.
Think of this as an english class and I am the teacher. Please share with me your 'own' poem, that has never before been in any challege or published here on the prose. It can be about anything. Poetry only (I prefer verse, with an awareness for simple grammar) although it is not mandatory.
I will read each piece thoroughly.
Please tag me after you have entered.
Please be patient if I do not review the same day you enter. I want to give every write the attention it deserves.
*Everyone will receive a review.
I am not a writing expert, reviews are based on my own experience of reading and writing poetry for many decades and what I have learned from my editors.
*These reviews are my opinion.
Thank you and have fun!
-Benz
105 reads
Skylight
She walks through a passage
Far across a meadow
Valiant,assured and valorous
The skylight shapes a shadow.
In a desire to accomplish an oath
her vision enlightens and she floats.
The dusk appears when the sun falls
Her soul’s endured and the fear enrolls.
Just like the wind blows,
She stumbles but flows
A melody she feels to sing
In the skylight where the moon’s still.
And the stars show a way more shining
for the approval of the night blinding.
She walks the night all alone
Unescorted by her family,friends or
anything that could be called a home.
And she goes on and on and on
further in the skylight of the rising dawn.