Challenge
Rewrite Me!
Take one of my pieces (your favorite, one you think you could do better, one that would be interesting in your own voice, pick one at random, i don't care) and make it your own! I am really excited to see what you all do with my words. I will be reposting everyone who enters, and I will choose the winner. Much love <3
Ascent
I miss you like the rain must miss the sea. Like moisture that got removed from the body and travelled upward to form a cloud. The cloud drifted slowly away and all I could do was watch until it was out of sight.
The cloud joined other clouds and turned the sky grey. Eventually it became a storm. The sky flashed in the distance.
I knew the rain was coming down, back to the body. To be whole again. I also knew that the next storm was coming, and you’d be gone.
I miss you like the rain must miss the sea. Do you miss me?
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