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I'm going to give you, the writer, a prompt and you can finish it however you want. In this case, the prompt is: Laura Salvadian had spent eight years behind the stone walls that encompassed the Celestial Castle.
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Laura??

yeah??

"Get up...it's time to get back."

She groggily woke up, squinted her eyes...while she did, the commander patted her head.

"I'm sorry for your banishment, how did you survive these eight years?", the commander asked.

No reply..

nothing.

The commander shook her this time."Hey?"

But he took a few leaps away as her eyes turned a bright red.

An evil grin broke into her face.

"You just made me remember the worst years of my life...time to pay"

The hidden men charged on Laura, from every direction...

"STOP!!!"...the commander yelled, but he knew Laura had turned COMPLETELY evil, and how the sorcerer's method of banishment didn't work on softening her heart.

...and also he was too late.

The weapons injured her greatly, and she fell to the ground.

Her eyes closed, and she went away.

The commander sobbed silently. "Sorry ,daughter."

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