Challenge































Heartbreak.
Tell me something heartbreaking. Poetry or prose, fiction or non-fiction. Winner will receive a spotlight. Tag me in the comments if you want feedback!
Pangs of Heartbreak
She squandered her love,
sprinkling and dripping
into swift river of dust,
swirling in a whirlpool
of sorrowful chants.
Hummingbird wings
brushed her heart
and departed,
lip synching the love
drowned in the sand
as high tides slurped
and swept her away.
Breath of her waves
listened to voices,
slithering unsaid.
Thumbs of feelings
depressed in meters
of ticking time
impressing her palms
with tempests of sorrow.
swooshing of angst
murmurs and sighs,
eye lashed promises
filter loss into space.
Strands of skin
weep soft rain
of empty arms.
Crescendo of pain
beats like a drum,
heart cracks like egg -
a soundless void
where roses
don’t thrive.
Hurt of loneliness
moans and wails
in barren soil.
Prisms of hope
parade downstream,
fingertips ooze
sound of no return.
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sandflea68
@SK_Shepherd- Thanks for the challenge!

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You're welcome. :)

Monk
Splendid as always my friend! @sandflea68

Firstborn60
Wow! Wow! Wow! Love this.

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@Monk Thank you so much!

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@Firstborn60 Thank you very much.

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SK_Shepherd
@sandflea68 I LOVE free verse poems! They're one of my favorites because in my opinion, they are one of the most difficult to master. Finding a real flow is so hard, and you've done it. Awesome job. This is a treasure and you should keep it close.

Ooo
a really nice rhythm to this

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Ooo
most welcome :)

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Monk
You have such a way with words! Just beautiful!

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@sandflea68 You're so, so welcome!! ^^

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