Challenge
Normal human
We are all used to describing and relating our love with heavenly bodies- sun, moon, stars. Even storms and oceans. I was thinking if you could give me something different, something that is more like normal not cliché! Something related to daily routine. ( I'm not able to explain this but I hope you getting meeeee)
To do you justice
To compare you to the sun
would not do you justice
for it is not star dust and fire
that makes you blush
To liken my love to ocean
would be a lame simile
for a thought of you
is warm and comforting
To see our passion like a storm
would be blind to what it is
sweat and warm skin,
gentle whispers and grasping hands
To say we are eternal
would be a grave mistake
for what make our love so special
is the fleeting moments we spend togther.
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