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Emotion: Ambedo
n. a kind of melancholic trance in which you become completely absorbed in vivid sensory details—raindrops skittering down a window, tall trees leaning in the wind, clouds of cream swirling in your coffee—briefly soaking in the experience of being alive, an act that is done purely for its own sake -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . Write short prose or poem expressing this emotion. Regardless of which on you choose it has to be expressed within 6 to 12 sentences ( prose) or lines (prose or poem). I'll be doing four more of these challenges later. Thank you Thought Catalog for gathering these wonderful words. May the games begin! --------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the 18th of January, I'll be starting Nodus Tollens as my Emotion challenge.
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The raisin, like a whole landscape of ridges and valleys,

The smell like an orchard on the edge of your nose.

Powered water, pinprick hot, ricochets off your body; showered water.

Echo. Echo. Echo. Each step bouncing off the hall’s walls

As you stride through the atrium.

Thud-dump-thud-dump-thud-dump, hear your heart pumping faster

As your breath whooshes through your lungs like a metro train not stopping.

See the web, in the corner, hanging droplets clinging on

Like a chandelier of water suspended on a silken thread.

Deep inside, the answers have been waiting there for you,

Yet you ignored them; immersed outside yourself.

Look within; the answers lie within.