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I saw wabisabi post a challenge like this on prose and I thought it was cool. In this version of the challenge you would take one of my poems and write it in your own style. You can do a total overhaul or just change a few things, whatever you want! My poetry isn't very good so this might be lame, but I hope you like this challenge.
Cover image for post I Fell in Love with a Ghost*, by sheriharper
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sheriharper

I Fell in Love with a Ghost*

That night, when sunset cast deep shadows

there, under the lamplight I saw eyes

that met mine from a hazy shape, low.

So deep entwined did our souls become

our hearts beat in my ears and my spirit

soared, like a lost seagull missing the boat

sailing off toward the Northern pole pit.

I knew then, you had died someplace cold.

I will be forever old. Lost in time, deprived

no one to grow close to, no one to grow old

with children and house, only a moment

then you were gone.

*first line from Luthien's poem

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