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We were stranded on a ship in the middle of the sea, we had food, only to last us one night though. I was hungry and wondering if we were ever going to get home, I wondered if we were going to survive, I was scared. It's night time now, I have never slept on a ship before and I was scared that something was going to happen. I finally got to sleep, I slept for about 10 hours. I woke up and remembered I was stranded on a ship with no fuel. I was still scared. We had breakfast at about 9:00 Am. I wished someone would just come and save us, everyone wished that. 'I see an Island' I shouted. 'Are we saved' asked Milopus. 'I hope so' all of the crew members said at the same time.

We got to the island and seen it had people on it that we didn't recognise so we paddled away with our oars but it's hard work paddling. Suddenly I came up with an idea, we can all take in turns paddling towards our country. It worked!!! Everyone was so tired but it worked. Once we all got home we had some food, a drink and a sleep. We must of been tired because we slept for about 16 hours each. The next day we still had to go to school but luckily our long sleep made us ready to go back to school.

At school all of our friends asked us what we done on the weekend and we replied with something like we got stranded with only enough food to last us one day and then we had to row back to shore. When we got home we ate some food had a drink and slept for about 16 hours.