Challenge
Write Ugly
Whether its with choppy sentences, weird topic, or in your characterization/dialogue, write something ugly. I put in a lot of effort to make my writing sound good and feel rhythmic, making my prose almost poetic. I'm tired of it. Please write me something to inspire off-beat styling. Please tag @wabisabi, I'll be choosing the winner.
UGLY
Disgorge the phlegm,
Gagging in disgust.
Blergh.
Pick at the scab,
Left behind by a bloodsucking leech.
Skin peels.
Knead the bunion,
Smearing the ointment.
Regurgitate the worm,
I ate for breakfast.
Chunks fall.
Plop.
Shrill screaming.
Cataclysm.
Crash.
Grotesque tongues.
Visceral fat.
@wabisabi
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