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Write a short story beginning with your character telling another character "I was wrong about you."
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Lynn

"I was wrong about you." I sobbed, with tears streaming down my face. My tears wetting his shoulder. "I was wrong about everything." I said. More to myself than him.

"No, you weren't. I still hurt you. I've still caused you more pain then someone should ever put you through." He sounded truly hurt, which only proves that he's a greater man then anyone deserves. "I'm a monster."

I looked up at him. Slowly raising my eyes to meet his.

"You are anything but a monster." I said. I meant it more than I've ever meant anything.

"I don't deserve you." He said as if reading my thoughts.

"That's not t-"

"Yes it is." He stated. As if he was telling a child 'yes, the sky is blue.'

"I don't care what you think you are or what you think you deserve." I said, before he could speak anymore false words. "I love you and there's nothing you can do about it."

He smiled at this and was silent for a while, then, "Thank god."