Challenge
Rewrite
Rewrite one of my pieces, from the oldest or the newest, into your style, a new perspective, or add something to it. Include what you choose to rewrite in your submission.
Tastes like salted honey\\
When dust covers the sky
I cover your eyes
and you cloak me under your hoodie,
warm as hot latté and lovely as lavenders.
You feel drunk in love
and I am drunk in you;
Praising the stars, lying under the tree.
I'm a sun and you my garden
I live for you
And you giggle for me.
I thank the fate,
Because I know it exists,
like the shadow of one’s existence,
like the drone and its queen.
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