EXAMPLE (my jumble tongue #13)
arctic veins freeze my feel
making barren my thinks
which will-me their air to steal
until the killing kind sinks
I see the noise shimmering
sway mouth cries to be blank-eyed
worked free the red simmering
that spilled what was lip-tied
death suits and battle paint
no change to twist the done
held in karma-locked restraint
elicited closed by the guilt-gun
no cares reflect on my husk
true sewn instinct selfers spark
taking of virtue to touch dusk
to fill the hallow of their dark
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ROUGH TRANSLATION
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A cold washed over me and my emotions
quieting my mind
except the will to choke them to death
until the killer in me is ready;
I see their struggle like art
lying mouths begging to die
to be drained of the blood
that confessed what was thought to be secret.
Armor and camouflage
can't change what happened
held by the reaping of what was sowed
plowed now by guilt
I'll remain stoic
a predator to make the selfish, like them, prey
that taking of innocence to "seize the night"
to satisfy an emptiness in their lack of compassion.
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P.S. Translations not necessary for the challenge, though are often helpful to new readers trying to understand your perspective!
* my #jumbletongue is NOT eligible to win, obviously.