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Challenge of the Week CCXVIII
You're dead. Trapped as a ghost in your own house, watching your widowed spouse mourn your death. Someone begins to comfort your spouse and you watch the two begin developing intimate feelings for one another. Your death was ruled a freak accident, but in reality you were murdered. Solve your murder and help your spouse realize their new lover is the person who killed you. 300-word minimum.
Bridged

Brocken Petals of Love

Early one morning as I walked down the alley to work, I realized I was a bit tense, deep inside my heart I could hear a strong feeling urging me not to go back, I thought to myself ’ let me just go back home, give my wife a kiss and walk back to work. I turned back, reaching near the front door of my house, I heard my wife shouting “Darling I told you I will make it in time, why don’t you trust me; you know that I love you so much, you should learn to trust me always?” and I thought she was talking to me, I rushed towards the front door opened it , and wanted to tell her I was not inside and that I had already gone outside on my way to work, but to my surprise it was not me she was talking to, she was holding a phone talking to someone else, as soon as I opened the door , she turned around and stared at me with her mouth wide open, but I had already sensed something amiss with her for the past one month, her behaviors were already changing.

That same evening I did not go home, instead I went to my friend who stays three doors away from my home, stayed there while talking and drinking, but I had not raised the case to Fred, though as I looked at his face I guessed he had already known what is going on, he politely said “it is Gertrude” I nodded with my eyes looking down; he again gave me a look and said, “oh man, I have been seeing them several times together! Sorry man, I was afraid to tell you, but don’t worry I know how I will help you with this”.

Toward morning i went back home, so as i can change fresh clothes and go to work, though i was still feeling drunk and dizy, i had a long coversation with Fred while drinking all sorts of mixutes, even i could not remember what i drunk. I reached my pockets for the house keys, when i entred in everyone was still a sleep, the living room looked disorganized, looking on the tellephone table, there lay a several half cut pieces of papers, i took some time to look at them one by one, they were like scrabbled with a pen, 'I think my little girl Dama was playing here' i thought, 'but wait a minute' i reache to a paper with my wife's handwriting, containing Fred's phone numbers, i tried to confirm the number by calling it, as it rung, Fred picked quickly up with a chanting, he said lightly "hey dear, i thought you are still sleeping, he was he the whole night" on my end i said nothing, and quitely i placed the phone down, climbed to the bedroom stairs, i looked at her as she was faking sleep, i shouted "it is Fred, Getrude! I know now, all along i have been your fool".