Challenge
re-written past
Alright, so here's the challenge. Take your oldest piece here on prose, blow the dust from it, polish it and give it another life. Show us what you started with here. You can refresh, change its length, or simply edit your work a bit (especially if it has been years since anyone had a chance to see it) or just leave it as it is because for you it's perfect. And tag me so I can see your entry ;) Ps. I will join in as well
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Running on empty <4 years Later>
And there was silence
No words
Just absence of sentence
Like we had no license
To speak in constance
As life sometimes
Leaves us out of balance
Creating a clearance
That leaves room for a voidance
But
In the distance
There will be a defiance
Breeding
A distinct guidance
Assistance
That will rid us of silence
Thus
Creating a brilliance of conversation
That will match a fragrance in sweetness
And yet be full of substance and essence
For now
Let us be in coexistence
And the sharing of words
Today
Spell out incongruence
Let us enjoy
the incipience,
the commencement of ourselves,
into this experience.