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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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As my world burned, she smiled. And as she smiled, I saw only a single tear before the flames engulfed her face. Hands shaking, I kissed the matchbook I held before throwing it away.