Challenge
Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
The sun
As my world burned...That's a pretty dramatic beginning, isn't it?
Let me tell you something you already probably know. The world spins on its axis as it goes around the sun -that's a universally acknowledged truth- But did you know that one day the sun will consume the Earth? That's pretty dramatic as well.
But did you also know that the sun is the main source of life? Sure you get burned. But if you don't play with fire you die from the cold. It's not so dramatic anymore, is it?
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