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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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LoveSheWrote

As my world burned around me, I took a look in my lovers dying eyes. The look of confusion in his face, wondering how the love of his life could betray him, how I was his demise .

@LEBASS