Challenge
monologue only
Try and write a story or a piece with no detail, no places, no descriptions, and no context. the only thing you have is people talking. You may find this is a bit hard or maybe not. At the beginning please say if this is 1st, 2nd, or 3rd person. Also, try to make the title as vague as possible.
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"i love your eyes."
"why?"
"they're..."
"what? why are you laughing?"
"no it's stupid."
"what?! come on!"
"you... you look like you see me. like as a person."
"of course i do."
"no, but you listen. you look at me like i'm not wasting your time. like you're not waiting to get your point across or just tolerating me for someone or something else. i say stupid things and you don't hate me or forget about me, i'm just a person. not hatable or disgusting, just as human as if i were..."
"were?"
"i don't know. if i were a guy i guess. sometimes i just feel like guys look right through me... i don't know."
"i'm sorry."
"don't be, it's not you."
"it's not you either."