Challenge
Ok, although I know most of us can be very critical of ourselves, I think we all have a favorite or favorites of our own work. Maybe we posted one that didn't get very much feedback. That is what this challenge is about! That one that slipped by! There may be more than one, but just pick the best and post it here. If you feel like it got neglected or you're just very proud! Post the best poem you feel you ever wrote on Prose! Don't forget, tag me
Occult Blood
I feel your pain if no one else does.
I see the ghost trails of tears on your face,
born of the nightly séances for memories long gone.
I notice the parts of you that are missing,
lost in the wrecks of failed relationships.
I understand the outbursts --
post-traumatic stress...
I know it's not over just because the wound stopped weeping.
Not all misery is marked.
Doesn't really make sense, does it?
You could be dying and not one comprehends.
But they're all tortured, like you, victims of their own grief.
There's blood on the floor an inch thick; no one is aware.
I see hurting people.
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