Request:

To any who read my posts, I am requesting your assistance in perfecting my newest project entitled "Extinction". After spending almost 8 hours a day working on this piece since February 14th, I am seeking constructive feedback. I am hoping that this feed back will help finalize this project.

As an assignment for school, this has been my most extended piece, totaling about 20,000 words. While the word count is not the crucial element, the quality of the work is. Therefore, I am requesting help from you to provide me with three pieces of constructive criticism to help me improve my writing.

Your feedback will be a requirement to complete this project, I plan to submit the project on June 7th, 2023. So, if you are willing to help me finalize this piece and make it shine, all you need to do is read "Extinction" and send me your constructive feedback by comment @me in the comment. Your input will be greatly appreciated, and I thank you in advance for your help.

HMS