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Write a piece of poetry or prose about losing your virginity. Winner will be judged not only on likes and comments, but on fire, form, and edge. The writer that kicks me in the teeth the hardest gets $200.
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AaronBarth

In My Bud’s Car

My friend gave me his keys; and then I took her hand. It was near the end of high school and she was definitely my high school sweetheart.

We closed the doors and she hopped on me.  I knew she had been with someone before but I wanted to exceed her expectations. 

I stayed like a throbbing rock inside of her for two hours. She was sweetly moaning and smiling all the while.  I'm sure my face looked like I was trying to solve an advanced algebra problem, overly focused. But she was surely looked cute enough for both of us.

I remember it felt good, but I remember even more how determined I was to satisfy her.

I was still erect after two hours in perfect warmth; when my two friends from the school dance came outside and began jumping on the hood of the car. 

We were laughing loudly, blushing and putting on our clothes.