Challenge
Write a piece of poetry or prose about losing your virginity. Winner will be judged not only on likes and comments, but on fire, form, and edge. The writer that kicks me in the teeth the hardest gets $200.
Beautiful Liars
We lied to each other as we lay together.
He lied and said he’d done this before, but in all fairness, so did I.
I lied and said I loved him, perhaps I believed it, but that didn’t make it so.
He lied and said he’d love me forever, but I harbor no grudge;
Forever was never what I wanted.
I lied and sighed “that was amazing”--I didn’t know better
but I knew enough to know it wasn’t so.
He lied as I looked into his eyes, deep pools of cosmic intensity that wrapped me up and transported me to a place where our lovers lies were the only truth.
Sweet, subtle lies of fading youth.
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