Korean war memory
Under a gun metal grey sky
Another bullet shoots by
My friend lays next to me dead
He took his own gun to his head
The stench of death is around me
Men I knew now a rotting sea
Flies and the smell of burning pork
I am alone listening to garbled radio talk
If hell was on earth it is here in the mud
Mixed with pompous pride and innocent blood
I want to go home for I am now the last
I cannot protect this hole from one more bomb blast
But I am a soldier to run would be treason
Even though I am fighting a war with no good reason
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I wrote this when I was 9 for my junior school English teacher Mr Abbott, he asked us to write an account of being in the trenches. My father served in the Korean war, he hated flies and the smell of cooked pork, being curious I asked why and he told me.
So I put myself in his mind set and wrote this. My dad told me off and said it was to be thrown away, Mr Abbott read it to the class and I got an A+...I loved the subjects he asked us to write about and I think it was due to him that I began writing so early.
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