they complete us
"But real love," she says,
"is when you'd
sew your skin into
the skin of your lover to
become one.
If I could cut off
my arm
from the elbow
and cut yours off as well
and join them together
as one limb, I'd go for
it. I'd then follow
with the other
arm, then the legs,
and finally the chests and
the foreheads
and lips.
We'd die of course, but that
would be the
beauty of it. We'd die
together, as one.
We'd become a mass of filth
and puss and
rot and
eventually melt into a single
substance.
That would be heaven.
You'd do
that for me, wouldn't you,
darling?"
Lying in bed,
he removed the pillow
from his face. It did nothing
to silence her. Of course
it did nothing.
Because she was not real,
only in his head.
They were already one
and the same
and as one-and-the-same
as they could get.
"C'mon already!" she
shouted. "Say that
you love me too!"
"Uh, I do," he mumbled,
a hand rubbing
circles at his
right temple
"Of course you do!" she
said. "However, last morning
when you fell
asleep
somehow, for some
unthinkable reason, your
dreams were not of me. I don't
understand how
such a tragedy could
have
occurred.
It's hell!
The simple idea of separation
between the two
of us is hell, darling, and I
don't wanna abandon you
in hell.
Don't worry. I'll keep you
awake. Dreams aren't
good for you.
I'll keep them away
and myself close."
He covered his face
with the
pillow again
and held his breath
She went on, "You know
what I dreamed last
time I was
asleep?
Of you, of course!
I dreamed that you were
so small and so
cute
and I could hold you
in my palm
and play with you so nicely
and squeeze you
all over
and, my ultimate fantasy, chew
on you!
Oh yes! I put you whole
in my mouth and
bit down on your chewy
cuteness.
Then I bit you in the middle
and tore your
torso off
and swallowed your bottom
half completely.
I came at that moment. Yes,
it was a very wet
dream.
I kept the top half of you
in my palms
and watched your beautiful
guts ooze out.
Ah, they were like swollen
spider legs. And I
made you walk
and crawl on them all
over my body.
Tap-tap-tap-tap-tap,
your hot gut-legs across
my sweaty skin went
up and down,
up and down.
Oh, and I swear the only
bad thing about
this dream was that it
ended too early. Just
when I was about to
sew your guts
on a spot
between my breasts.
But what am I saying? The right
time for that dream
to end would've
been NEVER!!!
Right, darling? Right?"
He tossed the pillow
away
and stood
Walked out of the
bedroom
and into the kitchen
"Darling!" she shouted
in his head. "What do
you think
of my dream?
Most wholesome
thing ever, right
darling?
Riiiiight?"
He opened a cupboard
and reached for
a little box of
sleeping pills
Opened it
"Darling?
What are you doing? What's
that?"
He poured a few pills
into his palm,
about six,
and swallowed them quickly
and placed his head
sideways under the
tap to suck at the
stream of water as he
turned it on
"What silly behavior,
darling," she said. "Those
things will
make you sleepy.
It... It wouldn't be
a problem if
you'd dream of me, but...
What if you don't?
Can you imagine? What if
you go to sleep
for hours and hours
and... Ah, I don't even
want to think about
it!"
He went back into
the bedroom
"Darling,
get those things out
of your lovely
stomach now! C'mon, let's
vomit together!"
But the only thing he
could do now
was start crying
and throw his numb body
forward
like jumping into a pool
so he could land with
the head into the
corner of
the nightstand
It was a fairly
loud bang
and he stayed down
lying on the floor, luckily
on a carpeted portion of it
He was on his side
so it was alright
even if he vomited in his
sleep
The sleep didn't
come yet
but something better
came.
A silence so sweet and
so mercifully tender
that his numb face
turned into a smile as
the eyes closed
It'll be alright
She will come back
by the time
he'd wake up
but she
wasn't always
so bad
Sometimes she
was
actually quite all right
Some time ago
when he worked up
the courage
to tell his
father about her,
the father said,
"Meh, that's nothing,
try living with
a real woman and then
see what it's
like to go mad for
real."
Of course
father was drunk more often
than not
so he didn't know
much about
women that were real
and women that were real
only to certain men. He
had his own
demons to live with
Everyone must
have those
else they're either
a boring saint who spends
a lifetime meditating
in caves
or not a complete person
to begin with
Yeah... demons
complete us
as humans
Why should one seek
to live without
them?
***
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Beer Pairing with Bullshit
The cart barricade shunts us
suspects past the wary checkout lord.
No one sane buys salad at midnight,
so management routes us to chips, beer,
and night-checkout man, tall and fifty.
We of the early morn file through
his glare that roves our
pockets for bulges and
rolls a teacher-poet
into the hoi polloi so that
for a time I do belong here,
for a time I am not marked
by education and station in
this low wage GED town,
my politics temporarily
indistinguishable from the camo-clad
MAGA man who also heads for beer:
comrade of twilight hours,
brother of the empty fridge.
They shelve the Bud and Keystone
an aisle apart from oatmeal stouts
and wittes. I meditate on pairings
for spinach-artichoke dip.
Nothing shouts out privilege
so much as the desire to doff it,
like a handcrafted cap.
My compatriot carries Coors
toward the self-checkout machine
that declines his card; he curses,
night check-out man scowls.
I pay and pass unobserved.
The truth is, I lack
sufficient they to feel
a bona fide we.
The truth is, I moved
to a town that will never forget
I’m from elsewhere.
The truth is, my beer
tastes delicious, and I deserve
dislocation and scorn.
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Serious is as serious does
Serious is as serious goes
Serious is as serious means
Serious is as serious cleans
Serious is as serious chants
Serious is as serious eats
Serious is as serious dreams
Serious is as serious believes
Serious is as serious encounters
Serious is as serious writes
Serious is as serious haunts
Serious is as serious kills
Serious is as serious screams
Serious is as serious drills
Serious is as serious prays
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Serious is as serious days
Serious is as serious pays
Serious is as serious toys
Serious is as serious joys
Serious is as serious ploys
Serious is as serious dunes
Serious is as serious means
Serious is as serious gains
Serious is as serious jeans
Serious is as serious deems
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Serious is as serious drinks
Serious is as serious clinks
Serious is as serious thinks
Serious is as serious hops
Serious is as serious elopes
Serious is as serious ropes
Serious is as serious clogs
Serious is as serious clogs
Serious is as serious vlogs
Serious is as serious lanes
Serious is as serious manes
Serious is as serious vanes
Serious is as serious veins
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Serious is as serious vikings
Serious is as serious stockings
Serious is as serious hunts
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LONELY POEM
I’m lonely in the sense that everyone knows
my name but no one wants to say it. I just wish
someone would ask me what I’ve wanted all along:
to live in a lake & never grow taller than the water.
To pronounce myself as a family of coral.
But I am lonely as forever, lonely as infinite,
as natural sequences, as order, as Google.
I do take comfort in the lack of a lonely growth;
I can’t wake up to more lonely unhoused bones.
Everyone I’ve ever met has their own least favorite elegy.
Mine tastes like soap in my throat & lives forward
& forward like a wheel goes around its axle. I’m okay!
I’m still sad, though. Say hello if you pass me on the streets.
We can talk about disappearing. We can lay on the floor & dream
of becoming black holes. In my favorite someday, I meet someone
who recognizes me instantly. It’s ridiculous, but beautiful.
Challenge of the Month
Happy November Writers and Readers;
Fall is a time of change, a time of ponderance, preparation, and preservation. And with the final month of fall comes our first $100 Challenge of the Month, wherein we explore the bright colors and darkening skies of autumn. Not only will the winner receive the $100 purse, we’ll also be sharing all outstanding submissions with our publishing partners and contacts. When you’re ready to get started, you’ll find the prompt here: https://theprose.com/challenge/7775. Best of luck!
With the arrival of our monthly challenge, we thought we’d shed a little light on how we’ll be judging your entries (and how we’ve been judging your entries in the Challenge of the Week). In particular we look for: creativity, fire, memorability, coherence, proper grammar, and linguistic mastery. Let’s take a closer look.
The First Paragraph
We read a lot of your writing, and usually don’t have the time to give every word and sentence the attention they deserve. As such, we will commonly eliminate entries immediately if the first couple of paragraphs are rife with spelling or grammatical errors, don’t read clearly, or don’t intrigue. Our advice - make your first paragraph your best paragraph. Make it captivating and irresistable. Make it shine. More advice on how to do so below.
Creativity
Written creativity can take many forms, and pervades every category along which we judge. It could take the form of compelling characters, exotic settings, unusual word choice, unique story arcs, and everything in-between. We want to think “wow, I would never have expected/conceived of/realized that.”
Fire
Fire is passion. We want to see your love for the craft of composition shine through. Whether a controlled burn, or a raging blaze, we want to see your dedication to the story, the characters, the poetry, and the craft. Some of the best writing reads as though the author agonized over every syllable.
Memorability
This is related to creativity, but somewhat different. It hinges a bit more specifically on the author’s ability to clearly convey that creativity. As we’re reading challenge entries, we keep a list of the pieces that catch our eye. When we’re done, we go back over that list of top contenders and choose the winner(s). More often than not, we’ll choose the stories we remember most vividly. In addition to compelling characters and themes, little details can go a long way towards making a piece more memorable. A perfectly crafted sentence. A witty title. A surprising interaction.
Coherence
Your writing should be lucid and coherent. If it’s hard to follow the plot, be it theater or thesis, it’ll be difficult to win. Avoid rambling, over-description, and muddled thoughts. Read your work back to yourself as though you hadn’t written it. Ask yourself, “what am I trying to communicate? Did I do so clearly? Is any of this hard to follow?” If we find ourselves lost or unsure of what’s going on anymore, we usually move along.
Spelling & Grammar
Do not underestimate the importance of proper spelling and grammar. Here at Prose, we respect, if not revere, the King’s English. While we forgive the rogue missing letter or misplaced comma (it happens to the best of us), repeated offenses and gross negligence are to be avoided at all costs. You are of course free to make stylistic choices like omitting capitalization; but unless it’s in the service of some artistic vision it’ll generally be frowned upon.
Linguistic Mastery
This is the x-factor, and the thing that sets great writing apart from good writing. This is proper useage of metaphor, descriptive language, imagery, word choice, alliteration, sentence/paragraph composition, overall flow, finesse, nuance, restraint, and everything in-between. For examples of “linguistic mastery,” please read some of the winning entries from our Challenge of the Week. The winners typically demonstrate a high degree of mastery in their work. To further illustrate what we mean, consider the following two sentences:
“The crows’ calls blared through the quiet like a siren, a dreadful cacophony that rose and fell like the tide, under the chilling, pale light of the full moon.”
“The shrieking of the crows sliced the silence, an unholy symphony beneath a cold, ghostly moon.”
Both are more interesting than “The crows were cawing loudly in the moonlight.” But the first exhibits a sort of scattershot approach, calls upon multiple disjointed metaphors, and betrays a lack of restraint. The second, by contrast, by surgical use of words like “sliced,” “unholy,” and “ghostly,” evokes a certain eeriness. It feels more intentional, and reads more clearly.
These are just a few of the things we look for, and we urge you not to think of them as some sort of “checklist” or “rubric.” Hopefully this has been informative, and will be of aid to you as your craft your entries.
Happy writes,
Prose.