Everytime we say goodbye, (enter consequent event here)
Every time we say goodbye,
i die a little,
don't mistake this,
for a quantum state,
death's no ON or OFF,
but a spectrum,
i die a little,
then die some more,
enchroaching,
not some pisitive-negative,
quantum polar state.
i died a little last time,
but its ok.
plenty left.
everytime we say goodbye,
i cry a little,
or is it that i wonder why,
too little
too little
here opposite, dychotomous.
i cant be uncrying once i started,
i cant be crying when i'm not. this sucks,
damn you for causing this polar shift,
though i died a little,
so maybe it's my lack of objectivity.
everytime i listen to Coltrane,
play 'everytime we say goodbye'
i live a little,
though lost in a sea of reeds,
soprano to tenor in the next one,
you wonder how that disk,
still spins,
it's not groovey.
everytime we say godbye,
i let it ride,
light flashing through the surface,
refracting, converging.
and i wander and wonder,
of gods and scale changes,
and metaposition,
and if this is supposed to be a love song,
you're some anarchist,
but what do i know,
of quantum mechanics,
i cant even do sums.
and you,
eating poorly scited songs for breakfast,
and pathetic cliches for lunch,
maybe we should just say goodbye,
a little.
Challenge of the Month XXVII
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We are making this announcement via Prose, versus the newsletter, due to a pending change in software. Hang tight for now. In the interim, and cutting to the chase, you may recall that last month's premium challenge prompted you to write an alliteration. The longest alliteration's author wins $50. Drumroll. Here are the editor's picks:
a day in the life, by CatLady1:
https://theprose.com/post/427767/a-day-in-the-life
(MAG)PIE, by Mnezz:
https://theprose.com/post/424476/mag-pie
An Acrostically Alliterative Abomination., by EstherFlowers1:
https://theprose.com/post/426293/an-acrostically-alliterative-abomination
swan songs, by WhiteWolfe32:
https://theprose.com/post/424050/swan-songs
and
Samson, by rlove327:
https://theprose.com/post/424020/samson
And the winner is...
...wait for it...
The Thalassic Thaumaturge: The Task To Trap Them., by CompassCreates:
https://theprose.com/post/427877/the-thalassic-thaumaturge-the-task-to-trap-them
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In the meantime, this month, enjoy a $500 prize times existentialism:
https://theprose.com/challenge/12275
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