Julianna had heard the phrase “raining in sheets”, but hadn’t entirely understood it until spending a stormy season in Florida. It was doing just that as she made her way down the dirt road just off of State Road 50. The Honda’s headlight bobbed and heaved with the severe dips cut into the mud by the afternoon showers for the past week. She struggled to see through water pouring onto her windshield as the wipers made pitiful attempts at slicing through it, providing only the weakest amount of visibility.
The old bag’s probably asleep, as usual, she thought to herself, straining to see the flimsy black mailbox that would signal the Tethers’ house. She probably wouldn’t even notice if I skipped this stop. She pressed onward, though, knowing it would be just her luck for Reeva Tethers to be waiting up for her and call into the office to give them an earful of just how lazy and inconsiderate her caretaker was.
Julianna’s eyes flicked to the clock one her dashboard; 8:46 P.M. Darkness had fallen an hour prior, but even before that it had been dreary and grey with storm clouds crawling across the sky around 1 in the afternoon. She suppressed the urge to be upset she wasn’t back at her house, reading a book with her new tea she had picked up the day before instead of inching down a sorry excuse of a clay road in Florida swamp lands, praying she wouldn’t get stuck.
COUNTING IN THE DARK
Derek Hilliard loved numbers and walking. On his way home from the accounting firm where his office was located he counted his steps; 572, 573, 574. This was his custom with every trip he could justify not taking a cab for, which was most of them.
From his house he knew that it took 550 steps to make it to Nelly’s Diner for when he wanted a burger and it was 495 to the grocery store. The count began when his foot left the stoop of his small porch and ended when his foot landed on either the first stair of the establishment or when he passed through his destination’s door if there were none. Most importantly the number when he reached said destination was required to end in a numeral of 5. This could never waver. Day in and day out Derek ran trillions of numbers through his mind and they were all arbitrary and messy, ending in 4s and 7s and the like.
Goosebumps rose on his arms and neck just at the thought of it. Derek shook it out as he re-popped his collar against the chill lingering in the late October air. The cold normally didn’t bother him, but it seemed to be moving in aggressively this year. Glad I decided to bring -
- 575
- my scarf with me today -
- 576…
The sun had already dipped below the monolithic forest of buildings around him, but he could still see a puff of steam before his eyes with every breath and number counted. No matter -
- 577
- we’ll be home soon -
- 578
- and we’ll put on some tea.
Derek had finally purchased a new book the day previous and the thought of tea, his chair, and a night of Grisham put a bit of a pep in his step.
- 579, 580
He nearly lost his count, a disaster which had only occurred once before when waiting for a train to pass and he couldn’t control his compulsion to count the cars (he no longer traveled by the tracks), as he all but stumbled directly into a construction safety barrier. “What the?!” he started indignantly.
He recalled seeing the equipment and workers bustling about this section of sidewalk on his way into the office that morning, but now the machinery was abandoned and the workers were nowhere to be found. Reflective orange netting was wrapped judiciously around large construction cones and barriers, blocking off all passage through the site which was now littered with large chunks of concrete, rebar, and miscellaneous trash, undoubtedly left by the workers.
His incredulity rose further as he wondered how was to get home now, or how any other vehicle was supposed to pass through at that. As he stood currently, though, he had the road to himself. To his right he saw a detour sign guiding the would-be traffic down a series of back roads that would most likely circle back around to 5th, where he now stood at 580 steps. If he had been able to progress forward, as he normally would, there only remained another 465 steps. If he took the path right there really was no telling where it would lead. I believe that actually might be where the train passes through. Right was a no go.
To Derek’s left ran a small trail he saw almost immediately hooked back right and looked to lead parallel with the sidewalk. To the left we go. Almost robotically he swivelled in place and proceeded down the path, needing to duck a bit under the small tree branches.
581, 582, 583.
A mild stroke of panic rose in his chest as he saw the path meander a bit further off to the left before him until it disappeared entirely into a small grove of trees. What if this didn’t lead back to the road? What if it was a dead end and he would have to walk back by the train anyway? He strained to see in the failing light what was beyond the trees and made out a brick wall. A small building, perhaps? It was likely he could skirt the side of it and be on his merry way. Hopefully.
584, 585.
He approached where the trail led off to the left. To his right he could see the reflective orange peeking through leaves and branches. He had no choice but to proceed.
586, 587.
The trees now ran into a thicker forest Derek was a bit surprised to find this close to the city, tucked away in secret. The forest ran off into darkness that would most definitely impede the efficiency of his trip and his counting. The trail, though, curved right once more and led into its own problem. Before him, affixed to the brick wall he had seen before, was what looked to be a small utility tunnel. Rather, it used to have been one for now small vines grew on and through the crumbling grout holding the building together and he could see thickets of weeds and unkempt tufts of grass dotting the gravel floor before it ran into total darkness.
He took a few hesitant steps towards the mouth of the tunnel. 588...589. Did he really mean to enter such a place? Derek was not one to entertain frightening thoughts of any kind outside that of losing his count again or coming upon a situation where he couldn’t round out the numbers, but he was not immune to finding a dark and isolating place such as the one before him unpleasant.
He squinted his eyes and saw a streak of light reflecting against the wall of the far end. The sun had all but set at this point which meant that it was likely to be form a street lamp at its outlet shining against the interior bend of the tunnel. Good, a shortcut. Let’s just get it over with. Derek began to walk into the tunnel with more than a hint of uncertainty about what he was doing. No matter though, the normal course home was just out of reach and this entire detour would likely only add another three hundred steps at most. He could slow or quicken his pace once he was back on track to bring the numbers in line again.
590...591...592.
He was torn in quickening his steps to get through the tunnel sooner, but the more the echoing darkness enveloped him, the less he wanted to be here. The soles of his shoes crunched on the soil beneath him, sending reverberations and startling sounds back at him in a disorienting fashion.
596...597…
He swallowed a lump forming in his throat. Almost halfway now. Nearly there. He could no longer make out the mostly vulgar graffitti on the ancient walls around him. The ceiling was uncomfortably low even as he had entered, but now in the void of the tunnel, fully within it’s shadowy grasp and unable to see where it was now hanging, it felt as if it were only inches from the hair on his head.
599...600…
Derek kept his eyes locked onto the streak of light now only a few feet from him. It was his anchor and waypoint in the claustrophobic darkness that was now everything his senses could perceive.
Crrrrrunch
The sound that he had most definitely not cause came from behind him. He stopped walking. 602 steps, remember that. He considered if he should turn and see what the origin of the sound had been, knowing full well that he didn’t want to.
It came again. Crrrrrunch. This time followed by the sound of something dragging. Then again.
A low gurgle of a voice emerged from the nothingness behind him. “Now what do you think you’re doing here?” The inquiring voice bounced all over the walls and ceilings, seeming to surround him in that moment.
Unsure of what it was he had intended to say, Derek opened his mouth to reply, but was only able to produce small choking sounds as he was frozen in place.
“This is my corner, my place.” Another prolonged step and the sound of dragging. It now sounded terribly close. “There is no room for the numbers you hold dear, boyyy.” The voice drew out on the last word and curled around him.
Derek finally turned in place to see what it was speaking to him. The light bleeding in from the entrance of the tunnel he had come from was now a low and weak orange from the street lights on that end. The shadow was difficult to make out; he thought he could see what almost seemed to be a tophat on a human head attached to a fairly normal looking torso, but the legs were cartoonishly long and reached forward like that of a giant spider and his arms were of equal length, dragging like long strands of rope in the dust behind it. A scream caught in his throat as he watched this unreal thing make its way toward him with awkward, long strides. It moved as a marionette puppet, seemingly untethered by physics or gravity.
“Come back with me to dark under your bed, the void outside of your bedroom window where we will drink deep of the unknowable and I will sow you in with the others.” The things pace quickened, now only 30 or so feet away, which it would be able to cross in another three of its unnatural paces.
Derek finally broke free of his paralytic fear and ran for the exit around the corner in front of him. He was sure he couldn’t outrun the thing in the tunnel, but it didn’t matter. The shadow’s foot falls began to fall in a series of four at a time. In his mind he saw it drawing its rag like arms in front of it in a horrendous gallop. He dared not risk looking behind, though, as it would only slow him down and he might be overcome once again with the fright a child feels when they’ve caught sight of a coat hanging just so in cracked door of their closet in the middle of the night.
And then Derek was standing in a clearing on the other side of the tunnel, the sidewalk in front of him and a street light bathing him in glorious sanity once again. He took four long and hurried strides to put himself into the ring of light and turned to look at darkness form which he had just emerged, convinced he would see the thing lunging for him with otherworldly claws and a million small mouths to devour him. There was nothing, though. Just the mouth of the tunnel, almost leering at him.
Now the only thought persisting through Derek’s mind, other than he was sure he might never sleep again, was that he had now lost count of his steps.
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