Challenge
Challenge of the Week CXCII
City of Love. You’re in 1940's Paris, making a penny a word to write erotica. Fiction or non-fiction, poetry or Prose.
electrolytes
distilled anxiety
pulses through the blood
as heavy intoxication catalyzes her shortness of breath.
a wet finger tip falls
with precision
from her inner lip
caresses her chin,
then drags
down her body
creating a path along her chest
that glistens from the dim artificial light.
the heat of her body
forces condensation
against the cold cement floor.
her breath
resonates in his chest,
her taste
slipping down his throat.
their eyes meet;
pupils dialate;
pulses quicken,
and she learns his name.
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Challenge
First Sentence
Your best, most gripping first sentence to start a story. Hook the reader as fast as you can.