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Pantoum
Write a Pantoum poem (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pantoum). It can be as long as you like, but should have at least three stanzas. This is the form for the repeating lines: ABCD BEDF EGFH GCHA
Ended November 30, 2020 • 1 Entry • Created by xCalypso
Challenge
Pantoum
Write a Pantoum poem (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pantoum). It can be as long as you like, but should have at least three stanzas. This is the form for the repeating lines: ABCD BEDF EGFH GCHA
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It went down the line. It went down, the line.
The child’s eyes alit as
it went down the line
shaking all of their hands
wringing wet, with sweat.
It went down, the line,
as the level dropped down.
Wringing wet with sweat,
on the floor the gauge broke in two.
As the level dropped, down
it fell, smashing toes
on the floor. The gauge broke in two
places, perfectly parallel.