Challenge



Mock Song
Here's another thing I love to do that I often feel is severely underrated: parodies! Weird Al anyone? Well, whatever the case. Take a song and change the lyrics, doesn't have to be a parody specifically, just your alternative lyrics to the same song. Word usage and placement should be at least 30% different from the original song. Any length, any genre. Please add the name of the original song and artist at the end. I'll post a sample. One rule: have fun :) Tag me in a comment if you want a reaction.
Hostage.
I wanna be alone
Just a longing soul, does that makes sense?
I wanna free my soul
And hide you somewhere I can't get
I don't know what to do
To do with your kiss on my neck
I don't know what is right
But this feels right so stay obsessed
Yeah this feels right so stay obsessed
Just let me run, run from you
I'll build a wall, won't let you through
It's not like me to be so mean
You were all I wanted
Just let me run, run from you
I'm not your hostage
I was never your hostage
*-* just this much
Song: Hostage by Billie Eilish
Link : https://youtu.be/skHbZBsS7hM
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Thinking
@TorNesorNerob what do you think about this?

LandCreature
Great job with placement and perhaps deeper than the original. I was reading along with the music and I got more lost in yours than the actual song. Bravo! ^_^

Thinking
@TorNesorNerob thank u

GaryEnglish
Love this. It just makes sense.