Challenge
To encompass the most ideas and feelings in the least amount of words. To express complex details in simple terms.
Write a poem. Try to use a minimal amount of words. Try to portray a large, detailed expression in a small amount of words.
48 reads
cold waters
in your cold waters
i can't sink any deeper
put down the gun
or just pull the trigger
my hair tangled
in waters so gently
you can't see my tears
but there are plenty
mouth turned violet
from waters so violent
you won't hear my screams
they're so silent
light finding its way to the bottom
my toes touching the sand
i know if i ever get out
you'll just drown me again