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Write a Poem that experiments with form or structure
Bullet points, indentations, spacing - put it in the form of a letter or in the form of the subject your speaking of. Anything that breaks away from conventional stanza formatting.
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lastar28 in Poetry & Free Verse

Drifting Off to Sleep

Falling

Twirling

Dancing

The endless stream of my thoughts are

Dark

Spiralling

Falling

Dripping

Slowly

As the pain takes over and I become blind

Burning

Terrible

Pain

Thoughtless

Empty

There is nothing left to think, only to feel

Hurtful

Longing

Pain

Broken

Pieces

Beyond repair, my heart can't beat anymore

Loveless

Souless

Dead

Slow

Peace

In death, I long for peace, for eternal sleep

Pillow

Blanket

Comfort

Gone

Forever

To a land of dreams

No one will remember me

And my broken thoughts

That just won't stop hurting

My broken heart that's lost all blood

Now I am....

Falling....

Twirling....

Dancing.....

Drifting off to sleep.