Challenge
WTIYOS
Take one of my posts and write it in your own style. Please tag me in the comments :)
Her
touch sets fire
like a match. I'm struck
I can't even breathe
when she's near
I willn't expose the truth —
Disguise my heaving chest
with relaxation — Yet,
my trembling lips betray, us
In time, in space,
no need for air
Nigh, I'm breathing in her
Every day spent in secret
in her arms,
in her eyes,
suspended by her pulsing heart.
@Luthien
ORIGINAL:
Her
Her touches set fire that must be cloaked
I cannot breathe for love of her
Do not, expose the awful truth
Disguise the pounding in my chest
Even my trembling lips betray “us”
Not now, but perhaps in time
Lest hope be forlorn
Oft I’ve begged Fate
Vice tis not, nor ever was
Everything in her arms, eyes and heart
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