Challenge
Hook me!
Write a first line or paragraph of a novel that will grip the reader and make them want to keep reading.
Queen of the Portal: Dimension Zileon
Death is a common factor in our lives. It can be stalled, but only for a while. So why? Why must we live this pitiful life, holding on to the chance that all can be well? NONE OF IT WILL BE LEFT! Why is it my parents misunderstood that? As the rulers of their dimension, they should be able to stand their ground! How could they flee and leave their home and send me to another dimension?! Maybe I should calm down...that’s what I was thinking when I heard about my past. But, you’ll find out about that later. I shouldn’t be focused on that anyway...at least not at this particular moment.
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