Challenge
Challenge of the Month XXXIII
Write your own version of Hansel and Gretel, your own twist. Make it street, make it a long poem, a short story, make it comical or horriffying. Make it yours. First place gets $100 in cold cash.
Mmmmm...i smell something sweet
Gretel was the vicious one,
the vindictive one,
Hansel found her charming,
if not somewhat alarming.
The old woman kept a secret,
close to her heart,
She had one, that didn't look like her,
ragged and torn apart.
They drew a hex,
whoever was in the circle wept,
forever and ever and ever.
Hansel wondered at the rapt
attention that Gretel kept
focused on the old woman
and her gentle pet,
the gingerbread cat.
It came to pass,
as everything does,
that the old woman in question
was none other than,
Gretel herself; Hansel the cat.
For as everyone knows,
You become what you eat.
And for all eternity, Hansel lay at the feet
Of the old women who did nothing
but weep and weep and weep.
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