Challenge
Challenge of the Month XL
Above the body after death: Something all of us have heard or read about, or seen in documentaries or on film. Across human history, there has been one outlier that purely represents any given emotionally tied flashback that someone would have seen before dying: Good, bad, heartbreak, excitement, betrayal, or love that was not able to see itself through, and many more. Write a story or poem about this, the extreme outliers, both what they're flashing back to, and why they're about to die. Winning piece of ethereal lift and float gets the $100. Go.
Set Free from the Outliers Tied to Me
As I gasp my last breathe
Memories
Thoughts
Everything
And anything
My life
A slide show
I see
I feel
Every emotion
Overwhelming
All the hurt
All the pain
All the sorrow
All the joy
All the love
All the happiness
All the beauty
All the amazement
All I am
Setting me free
To be
All I was
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