Challenge
Poetry: Describe a Suffocating Love
Describe a love that is either good or bad, but make it well known that one of the two or both of the parties feel suffocating at some point, whether to each other or to the reader to the point of annoyance. Bonus points if you can make them a couple that stays together regardless, it just ups the ante.
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Whisper
My heart screams in pain as it throbs,
The feeling unsilenced by my sobs.
My mind shouts thoughts of love,
Only to be drowned by fear , not enough.
My sould aches to bursting,
Am I the only one thirsting?
Can nobody feel me?
Can nobody see?
A seed without water,
Will nobody bother?
Living without,
Inside this drought.
My salty tears don't do,
I feel I'm screaming,
but it's just a whisper to you.
HRH