Challenge
Write a piece about an insecurity, and then comment a critique on someone else's piece, try and be constructive, I will write first so everyone has a chance to comment on one, and I will try to comment on everyone's.
Perfectly Flawed
I seek refuge from a judgmental world.
I hide myself from the pretty ones,
the ones who lack even the most humane flaws.
I fear the stares of disgust I may get, but never notice.
I choose not to pay attention, and place a cloak of invisibility
upon myself, so dark that all can see.
I am never completely alone, for I can feel the stares that aren't even there
and can here the thoughts that aren't even made.
I'm insecure about myself, but no one else sees these flaws
because I'm completely perfect.
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